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Review run-on fixes: 1) Separate two independent clauses (full sentences) with a period. Example: Error: I went to the store I bought ice cream. Fix: I went to the store. I bought ice cream. 2) Connect two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction (FANBOY): Error: I went to the store I bought ice cream. Fix: I went to the store, and I bought ice cream. (Remember, a coordinating conjunction is always set off by a comma.) 3) Connect to related independent clauses with a semicolon. Error: I went to the store I bought ice cream. Fix: I went to the store; I bought ice cream. http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon
 * This website does a nice (although weird) job explaining how to properly use a semicolon:

Power point which goes through the essay structure and TISAS format: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1Gb1uygEjhKbbo6Z6gIGFNYL7Fq7PiNzeaFRr6lsuMDE/edit?usp=sharing

Work time on essay

HW: A full rough draft is due in class on Tuesday so we can have a full round of peer editing.