11.21.13+and+11.22.13

Editing: Group Essay

Use the following guidelines to edit your own paper as a group (or individually if you missed class):

Cutting the "fluff" discussion (see back page of worksheet linked above)


 * Thanksgiving Break HW:**


 * A final, edited draft is due when you return from Thanksgiving Break.** Over break, you need to have someone in your life (friend, sibling, parent, etc.) edit your essay for you to help edit. Have this individual fill out the editing sheet I gave you in class today.


 * IF** you email your essay to me by Tuesday 11/26 at 4PM, I will grade it over break and have it for you when you return. If you choose this option, the other materials (highlighted draft, annotated poems, etc.) will be due AFTER you return.