12.16.13

Peer-editing day:

If you were absent, please color-mark your memoir for:

Color #1: A compelling hook--have you found a way to grab your reader's attention?

Color #2: Character detail--all three kinds: material, physical, and emotional? Where can you add specific detail that makes your characters come to life for the reader?

Color #3: Dialogue exchanges--check for correct punctuation and paragraph placement

Color #4: Imagery--have you created vivid imagery in your writing? Where can you enhance your images to connect with all senses?

HW: Complete your 3-4 images that compliment your memoir. You will have one more full work day in the lab, but, at this point, you should have at least 2 pages complete.